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07-18-2007, 09:48 PM
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My Mood:  | | Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Florida Age: 18
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Points: 0.90 Donate | | your pretty good.  keep up the good work.
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07-22-2007, 07:15 PM
|  | Joint Strike Fighter | | Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Lancaster Pennsylvania USA Age: 20
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Points: 100,000,000,000.08 Donate | | Thanks man
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07-22-2007, 10:57 PM
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My Mood:  | | Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Iacon, Cybertron Age: 20
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Points: 14.89 Donate | | | I write stories, but they all suck. They are all generally the same thing. A mash up of all the different franchises I like. |
07-22-2007, 11:04 PM
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My Mood:  | | Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: A box
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Points: 1.51 Donate | | | too long for my attention span.
good job on length though
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07-23-2007, 09:51 AM
|  | Super Senior Member | | Join Date: Nov 2005
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Points: 2.65 Donate | | | To be honest, I didnt like it. The way you not only developed the characters but the entire story was, well... bad.
You should start off with one solid short story then just work on that. Try not to get to carried away with length, you seemed to be making random chapters for the sake of quantaty. And the character development... how anybody could stand watching there freinds being mutalated and then go about living there life as normall is unbelievable. You should try and make the 'wiredness' more "twilightzoney". Like have a decent semi-logical explaination/story line and have decent twists that dont relie on "James Bond style luck" to resolve eg. Dont resolve conflicts like this = "and then a meteor crashed into the ship killing the bad guy" or somthing.
Any way... yeah. |
07-23-2007, 09:30 PM
| | | Joint Strike Fighter | | Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Lancaster Pennsylvania USA Age: 20
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Points: 100,000,000,000.08 Donate | | | Thanks for your opinion. I'll take what you said into consideration
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07-24-2007, 04:47 AM
| | | Super Senior Member | | Join Date: Nov 2005
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Points: 2.65 Donate | | Just to be sure I didnt mean to offend you in any way so if I did I didnt mean it at all. |
07-24-2007, 11:35 PM
| | | Joint Strike Fighter | | Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Lancaster Pennsylvania USA Age: 20
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Points: 100,000,000,000.08 Donate | | | Nah you didn't offend me at all. I apreciate your honesty. | |
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