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12-08-2005, 10:48 PM
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Points: 2.19 Donate | | | A Quick Yet Hot Verse Yeah, I'ma rapper, this has no bad words in it although I use them a lot. Don't FLAME this if you don't like rap. Just leave comments on how it is and stuff. Instrumentals: Hate It Or Love It *BOOM*
You can hate or love things, or respect what you got//
You can keep fate and rough things, just protect your lot//
Lemme get at you, we all people, so put away your (ya) glock// *BOOM*
I go around the school corner, man, can't stand the jocks//
They always runnin' they mouth, man, can't stand to shot//
I leave my house everyday, wishin' that stress would die//
But the day just flies with disses and then the implys//
I'm thinkin' to myself, grandma, just get a life//
Damn, man, can't stand the life that I go by//
But now about the places that I reside//
So get out your lighters and hold em up for Brooklyn//
Get them up for Philly, wait not Brooklyn, call it Crooklyn//
Cause these two is where all the real originals at//
And Philly was the place I was originally at//
Brooklyn is the place were all my friends at//
So God Bless ya'll and love the trends Sas// *BOOM*
You can hate or love things, or respect what you got//
You can keep fate and rough things, just protect your lot//
Lemme get at you, we all people, so put away your (ya) glock// *BOOM*
You know I try hard at school, but can't keep my concentration//
I'd be better off at home trying to make a fly deviantation//
In math, I just don't understand all of these equations//
So they give me tutoring as a compensation//
Then they say I sign my test, what an cheap accusation//
Then people look at me, like I don't even know Mason//
Yeah, I study my work, just me and the work ain't affiliated// *BOOM*
You can hate or love things, or respect what you got//
You can keep fate and rough things, just protect your lot//
Lemme get at you, we all people, so put away your (ya) glock// *BOOM*
Now I'm in my last year, it's all startin' to manifest//
I only got one chance, and I can't let it slip//
That's personal, so I ain't gonna reflect//
See, my partner Collin', he from the Mid-West//
Me and him passed this stuff together, all these rhymin' tests//
So if you lookin' for the kids with the platinum plaques//
Look for the best, nothing lest, so forget the rest// *BOOM*
You can hate or love things, or respect what you got//
You can keep fate and rough things, just protect your lot//
Lemme get at you, we all people, so put away your (ya) glock// *BOOM* (With A Fade) | 
12-08-2005, 10:58 PM
| | Junior Member | | | | | its dumb hard to tell without a beat but your rhyme scheme is off/ iaint tryin to stunt on you tho
__________________ Hate it or love it the underdogs on top and im goin shyne homie till my heart stops | 
12-08-2005, 11:11 PM
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Posts: 138
Points: 0.33 Donate | | Quote: |
Originally Posted by B_a_n_a_n_a_s its dumb hard to tell without a beat but your rhyme scheme is off/ iaint tryin to stunt on you tho | i agree u need more practice | 
12-08-2005, 11:12 PM
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Posts: 125
Points: 0.15 Donate | | | change your freaking avataar Bananas !!!
Please admin do something | 
12-08-2005, 11:16 PM
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Originally Posted by tamu0910 change your freaking avataar Bananas !!!
Please admin do something | whats wrong with it
__________________ Hate it or love it the underdogs on top and im goin shyne homie till my heart stops | 
12-08-2005, 11:17 PM
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Posts: 159
Points: 2.19 Donate | | | Imagine the Hate It Or Love It beat, it goes right with it, the scheme is not off.
Change your avatar, dam, that sh*ts nasty! | 
12-08-2005, 11:21 PM
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Posts: 125
Points: 0.15 Donate | | | ok thank you Bananas | 
12-08-2005, 11:22 PM
| | Junior Member | | | | | nah ite im not sayingthe beat is off im saying your rhyme scheme is
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your not consisten with that pattern...jus trying to help you dont flame on me for that my nigga
__________________ Hate it or love it the underdogs on top and im goin shyne homie till my heart stops | 
12-08-2005, 11:48 PM
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Posts: 159
Points: 2.19 Donate | | | lol, im not black
i dont get wat u mean bout the rhyme scheme | |
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